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Old 14-05-2007, 07:21 AM
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The Equation to Evil

Mad One snickers and beckons their rage,
The demons howl from within their steel cage,
The screams intensify, blood falls like rain,
Mad One falls silent as he falls slain.

The Troubled sighs and bows slight,
Steps out of the hall, taking a right,
A flick of one's wrist, a spade then appears,
Cuts deep in his mind, digging up fears.

The Judged One flails within his dark room,
Something in the air, 'tis shade and gloom,
Eyes widen in his poor panicked head,
Gun blares through his mind, and now he's dead.

The Cursed One sleeps, then wakes in his fright,
His bed sheets stained with blood in this light,
He then ventures to his window-sill,
"Subtraction done, nothing left to kill."
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Old 14-05-2007, 12:32 PM
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Re: The Equation to Evil

LOVE IT! So full of darkness...betrayal......smoth ered in gore....ahh
Masa, you are my angel of darkness
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Old 14-05-2007, 08:42 PM
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Thanks for loving this rather shady poem...

Angel of Darkness? Lovely... Arch is going to have a field day when he hears this...
But for you-anything that pleases.
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Old 15-05-2007, 08:15 AM
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Haha, how so?
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Old 16-05-2007, 06:25 AM
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Oh well he's an Archangel of heaven, and has been saying I am a Seraphim that has fallen... so this is like a punch in the jaw to me, but i guess it's okay...
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Re: The Equation to Evil

I must admit that I'm lost entirely!! Haha, this is sad.

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Old 16-05-2007, 06:49 AM
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~Israfel!?~

*Malphas*

Haha! But anyway, don't worry about it, that is one interesting fellow though! But if you want me to be your little fallen angel of dark and shadow, well I guess I can just for you!
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Wait wait....
*Malphas?!*

lol well you don't have to be a fallen angel ^_^ and considering the fact that I'm pretty dark and "fallen" myself, I think the occasional sunlight would do me some good!
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Old 17-05-2007, 09:52 AM
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Malphas is my favorite of the Demon Lords...

And yes, Masa gets sunlight aplenty (sunburn) ARGH!
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"Mad One snickers and beckons their rage;" I believe also the word is bed sheets. I thoroughly enjoyed again how you use color to give more then just mental imagery.
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Re: The Equation to Evil

Yes, thanks ever so much!
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