MemberPanel

ourSponsors

Google
   


Notices


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 01:48 AM
Masa's Avatar
Foolishness Incarnate
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,731
Total Points: 6,652.45
Masa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary member
Send a message via Yahoo to Masa
One of those Days

Waking up every morning,
You get that feeling,
Gonna be one of those days.
---
Hiding yesterday's worries,
Under an old smile,
Bidding farewell to weakness,
Grab my cap and books,
Hop on my bike and ride off,
To that school and endless work.
---
Barely get through morning,
Picking away stuff,
Sorting madness from the rest,
Arguing at lunch,
Just going to be those days,
Where you only win migraines.
---
From school straight to the cafe,
Find that uniform,
Act as polite as can be,
Be pleasant and cool,
While fighting for every yen,
And making sure I get tips.
---
Night falls and I leave my bike,
I'll get it later,
I can still use the train pass,
Search through my pockets,
Nothing to be found, aw crap,
Guess it's just one of those days.
---
I finally get back home,
Nothing said, just sleep,
It is just one of those days.
__________________
You guys all know I'm a lazy reviewer, so please PLEASE PM me if you want a specific poem or story commented on! There's no pleasure in eeny-meany-mieny-moe-ing everything nowadays! Yare yare...
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:07 AM
Storiesmaniac's Avatar
Mr. Wonderful
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: australia
Posts: 2,150
Total Points: 24,079.22
Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!Storiesmaniac is so hot right now!
Send a message via MSN to Storiesmaniac
Re: One of those Days

I know exactly how one fo those days feels...Great poem masa, really got the feel of it, and really got the tired sick of everything narration flowing through.
__________________
Join
A
Challenge

Today!


Or i'll kill you
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:10 AM
Masa's Avatar
Foolishness Incarnate
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,731
Total Points: 6,652.45
Masa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary member
Send a message via Yahoo to Masa
Re: One of those Days

You got it man! I'm so tired of it all... nothing we can do but press on huh?
__________________
You guys all know I'm a lazy reviewer, so please PLEASE PM me if you want a specific poem or story commented on! There's no pleasure in eeny-meany-mieny-moe-ing everything nowadays! Yare yare...
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:16 AM
Lubesh's Avatar
Big Boss
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne UK
Posts: 6,229
Total Points: 38,814.25
Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!
Send a message via AIM to Lubesh Send a message via Yahoo to Lubesh
Re: One of those Days

I love this kind of stuff....everyday stuff intertwining with glints of that particular master's pen.

Quote:
Hiding yesterday's worries,
Under an old smile,
__________________
Did you know...points are up for grabs....just for entering...

250 - LIMERICK, CFPC, 55, EMWE,
1000 - TotM, 1000 WC
100 - VOTING IN A CONTEST POLL, YES, JUST VOTING!

Comp/Challenges

FFFC
CFPC
1000-Word Challenge
Limerick
ToTM
EMWE
GQC
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:27 AM
Masa's Avatar
Foolishness Incarnate
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,731
Total Points: 6,652.45
Masa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary member
Send a message via Yahoo to Masa
Re: One of those Days

Thanks Lubesh! I've been putting alot more of my personality into my poems... no idea why.
__________________
You guys all know I'm a lazy reviewer, so please PLEASE PM me if you want a specific poem or story commented on! There's no pleasure in eeny-meany-mieny-moe-ing everything nowadays! Yare yare...
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:33 AM
Lubesh's Avatar
Big Boss
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne UK
Posts: 6,229
Total Points: 38,814.25
Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!Lubesh is so hot right now!
Send a message via AIM to Lubesh Send a message via Yahoo to Lubesh
Re: One of those Days

Because u have heaps?...ok, it's a general consensus that i would adopt u tomorrow but that aside...u do! maybe ur bored with fantsy and flowers as we all do get sometimes.it's good toexpand a bit or whatever it is we do.lol
__________________
Did you know...points are up for grabs....just for entering...

250 - LIMERICK, CFPC, 55, EMWE,
1000 - TotM, 1000 WC
100 - VOTING IN A CONTEST POLL, YES, JUST VOTING!

Comp/Challenges

FFFC
CFPC
1000-Word Challenge
Limerick
ToTM
EMWE
GQC
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 19-06-2007, 02:35 AM
Masa's Avatar
Foolishness Incarnate
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,731
Total Points: 6,652.45
Masa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary memberMasa is an Honorary member
Send a message via Yahoo to Masa
Re: One of those Days

It's also a general consensus I wouldn't doubt it if you did kidnap straight from this chair. And my parents would put up a five cent ransom.

I'm never bored with fantasy and flowers, taking the problems in life and stamping a great big smiley face on it is what I do. But expanding my mind and thus... not that bad either.
__________________
You guys all know I'm a lazy reviewer, so please PLEASE PM me if you want a specific poem or story commented on! There's no pleasure in eeny-meany-mieny-moe-ing everything nowadays! Yare yare...
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Tags
None



Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


All times are GMT +9. The time now is 11:47 PM. vBulletin Skin by ForumMonkeys. Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.1.0 ©2007, Crawlability, Inc.
Advertisement System V2.1 By   Branden
Copyright © 1999 - 2008, StoriesMania.Net


Love Systems | The Attraction Forums | Savoy

Mortgage | Loans | Credit Cards UK | Online Advertising | Music Festival