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Re: When the Corn
The last stanza's really powerful- it ingrains in your mind.
Your command of natural imagery is masterful. I'm jealous
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lol--well, it better be masterful because I spend WAY too much time out in nature, simply observing and being. Nature is like my "massage" to ease away whatever hurts or kinks in Life I may have.
Thank you for reading so many of my poems. lol . . . I really enjoy hearing back from people.
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I spend lots of time in nature too, in fact at the moment i'm in an isolated villa in the middle of the Ibizan hills, very theraputic. I try to write about it and end up getting sad about the fact that in the future it may all be a giant starbucks or something...
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And i'm torn between the country and the city. Not in terms of environment, natures ordered chaos over urban chaos any day, just in terms of people. In my experience, people who've lived in the country side their entire lives tend to be quite small-minded and ignorant and prejudiced against anything outside of their 'sphere' as it were. People in the city tend to have more broadened horizons....
On the other hand, living in cities, all cramped together like tinned sardines definitely chisels away at peoples sanity, and you get much more violence, hate and just general madness. I suppose what one wants is balance, just like nature. Alas, I ramble. Yeah, your stuff catches me more than most, keep it up!
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Awww, thanks! Talking about nature, (and this will seem completely unrelated, but it really IS, lol) I want to move to the UK someday. If I do well in prelaw at college, perhaps I can get into Oxford for law school. That would be AWESOME!
It's nice to hear you ramble . . . you should do it more often. lol And I agree with the whole "small-minded" thing. Prime example: the hobbits (LoL). I guess my ideal place would be a university in the country where you have nature but all the intelligence is there too. I live on the fringe of a city where the smog is so nasty and the people are so rude. I get annoyed all the time the way people just run into you at the store (I mean physically, not as in . . . "oh, hello! Nice to see you!") and don't even say, "Oh, excuse me. Did I hit you like that? I'm really sorry. My bad." Gosh! You'd think that politeness and general human goodness has slipped through the cracks of existence these days. Ah, and now I'm raving about humanity. Gotta rave just a tad more: and what has happened to good old family values as in, let's all sit down to dinner together and eat. Why do people have to be so caught up in MONEY, in "work, work, work." Turn off that "bloody tele" (as some Brits say, lol) and TALK to those you love, for crying out loud! Godde should have called me to be a preacher! I am NOT afraid to tell the world the truth about it. So there's my mini-sermon. Thanks for all your nice replies. I always feel so encouraged after reading from you.
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