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Old 01-04-2005, 08:58 AM
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Rain Dance

On rainy days wet and chill
I sit upon the windowsill
and listen to the rain beat
a patter-dance of small feet.
The floods engulf the house-lane,
and brooks run down the window-pane.
Ducks from Pond in wet feathers
waddle in their favorite weather.
The flowers bend for water-weight,
and puddles pool around the gate.
I like it when the world bathes
and sun is covered by rain-wraiths:
Those heavy clouds of grey slate.
Yes, rainy days I do not hate,
for I am warm, dry entire
as I lounge before blazing fire,
laughing at the world outside
with its grey flowing water tide.
The earth at peace; I at rest.
This be the weather I like best.
On rainy days wet and chill,
I sit upon the windowsill
and listen to the rain beat
a patter-dance of small feet.
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Old 01-04-2005, 02:02 PM
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Re: Rain Dance

I very much enjoyed reading that.
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Old 01-04-2005, 03:59 PM
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I think that is a wonderful poem......I will share it with others......thanks!!!!!
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Old 05-04-2005, 04:47 AM
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Re: Rain Dance

Every now and then I read a poem on here that strikes a chord in my inner being and crazy enough, a few of them have been written by you. Very nice, I sincerely enjoyed it.
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Old 05-04-2005, 05:35 AM
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Re: Rain Dance

hehee . . . *blushes and curtsies* thank you very much. I wrote this poem on a rainy day . . . lol . . . only, I was WISHING I could be at home reading, all nice and warm. I was in class. grrrr. The buildings are always too cold or too hot and . . . ok. I'm not going to complain. lol--thank Godde I'm graduating this year. Off to college for me! to study law, psychology, philosophy, religion, and languages! THAT will be a blast. No more horrid calculus . . . now I'm babbling. sorry . . . and thanks again.
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Old 11-04-2005, 09:02 AM
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Re: Rain Dance

I re-read this poem almost every day.....It is one of my favs on this sight
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Old 14-04-2005, 11:08 AM
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Re: Rain Dance

how sweet! I'm glad you really like it . . . the thoughts in it always make me smile. I think it sums up my feelings on every rainy day. . . wow. I am REALLY glad you like it.
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Re: Rain Dance

It is quite interesting...Makes me relaxed, and soothed........
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