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Old 27-09-2005, 11:03 AM
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Storm after Storm

Hurricane after hurricane,
Only they still mane,
Storms after storms,
Out of the corpses come the worms.

Rain after rain,
Comes like a deadly songs refrain,
Gust after gust,
Showing death's lust.

Bellow after bellow,
Waters turn red and yellow,
Push after push,
Souls and hope turned to mush.

Death after death,
Struggling for one last breath,
Rising water after rising water,
Why doesn't anyone bother.

"What a shame" after "What a shame"
But where do we put blame?
Pity after pity,
Politicians call for a committee.

But what do we do nothing,
We don't really care,
Those who do are giving what they have,
With nothing in return.
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Old 01-11-2005, 11:48 AM
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Re: Storm after Storm

That was great. I get many different feelings, and themes out of this.
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Re: Storm after Storm

Wow that was really amazing. The last 3 stanzas made me feel the helplessness and the hoplessness of our situation, so many people and the world itself needs our help, or lack of it in some cases and people just sit back and complain and say "someone should do something" but it seems as though no one does. And those who do, as you say, get nothing for what they give us all. Man, I'm rambling like a fool, only a really great thought-inspiring piece can do that to me so I will give us all a break and just say "Triple YAY".
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Re: Storm after Storm

I like the poem but I am not a fan of the rhyme.
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