[spinx]

Eating, breathing, killing

a total misunderstanding

intelligence hiding in a
black and white
body

as you swim gracefully
through the open
blue sea

yet you do not eat us
when you see
us

with an iron clad memory
you know I am a friend
to be

and only one mate
for each

even if one should die
no other will
be

so life in solitary you
shall stay

not just an animal
to me

but an awesome sight
to see

as you glide through
the open blue
sea

a beautiful life that
deserves to be
free

[sensitive1]

I liked it. Nice mood.

[paperclip49x]

and olnly one mate
for each

There was a typo in only, but I really love the format you choose to write in!

[Dark Kitten]

Good story of the orca here, there is a lot of misunderstanding surrounding that poor creature isnt there?
~DK
ps: I have fixed a couple of little spelling mistakes for you.
freind = friend
olnly = only

[Storiesmaniac]

Interesting concept. Keep writing.

[spinx]

Thanx dark kitten..get to written and missed those...ooopps.lol

[Dark Kitten]

hehe you are welcome, happens to the best of us. Well except for me of course! BAHAHA yeah right...
Just keep writing and I will keep editing, no worries!
~DK