[lostsoul92]

The starry night sky
The warm feeling in the air
Love's here all around
The green grass beneath our feet
The moon in nature's nightlight

[lostsoul92]

yea yea............. i know. but it's a hiko. I did them in 6th grade and i really like them. so i keep writting them. wut ya think? or

[Dark Kitten]

"The moon in nature's nightlight" ... do you mean the moon IS nature's nightlight?
This is a pretty hiaku, I like the extended bits past the normal hiaku length. Good job.
~DK
PS: I posted this in nature as per your request, though this could also be in closed-form. I DO like it in nature though, its such a beautiful tribute.