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Old 30-11-2005, 12:57 PM
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[PICK] Seething Sounds

Fallen Tree:

storm strikes sylvan strong
supine sorrow swells sunlight
seedlings strive stronger



Noctiluminescence:

starlight shatters sky
separating silver strands
striking shadowed sands



Oceanic Romance:

sonorous swimmers
slowly sing sweet serenades
summoning soulmates


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Author's note:
Ahh, challenge.
I don't know why I chose "S",
it just seemed simple to
select suitable synonyms
of sufficient syllables.

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Well done! The second one was my favorite.
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ahh beautiful, like a breath of fresh air I needed. I loved them all but I didnt see them as seperate. I saw it as one in a story. Good work great
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Re: Seething Sounds

Thanks guys. The first of these I wrote months ago when I found a huge fallen oak in the woods, and a stand of small trees growing up in the light the giant had once blocked.

The other two were written just tonight...I was grading papers and (as usually happens with my poems), the first line of one appeared my mind. I was happy for the distraction, and spent some time working them out.
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