[Masa]

Sweet aroma of Heaven around her,
Dreaming of seas and lakes of myrrh,
Sleeping heavily on her bed,
Pillows draped by golden locks of her head.
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Angel slumbers in a world all her own,
A small smile makes her feelings known,
Woven around a gem of dreams,
She's in a world of perfection, it seems.

[Lubesh]

Loved the whole sleep scenario. Beautiful masa.

[Masa]

Thank you Lubesh, for your most well-treasured reply and views on my poem.

[LullabyHearts]

I love the last line, and its really pretty...but I think it should be longer...its really short doesn't show off much potentional when its two stanzas.

[Masa]

Hahahaha, I generally make my poems short and sweet, being too long tends to break my concentration, and thus it becomes bland. Besides, this is a challenge for me when I must try to put as much feeling as possible in small poems.