[Lubesh]

Elton John classic inspired this parody.....inspired by our own cfpc#12


Lucy shows her secrets to Simon
Lucy’s gonna sway with Simon
Today…..

Simon has passed out and gone by the river
Where apples fall freely, not given away

Lucy approaches she tasks him quite harshly
Why did you run away?

‘Luc if err, I told you, you’d cry and I’d hold
you, but not in an innocent way

But Simon I want you to, need you, to hold me do
I’ll be the devil today!

Lucy’s in the sky with demons

Lucy’s in the sky with diamonds
Lucy’s in the sky with demons
Lucy’s never shy with Simon

You don’t say…..!

[RENA HANDS]

Why did u run away?

You have written out "you" throughout the remaining of your creation so I thought I would mention the write/print/editing error(possible) here.

This in no way affects or effects the rhyme and rhythm of the Parody, but I wanted to mention it.
Also I am not a great fan of Elton John, but this submission was just lovely. Bravo, Lubesh.

[Lubesh]

Thanks rena and for spotting that lol

[colinbaker62]

Very clever parody material...Another favourite Elton John track is "Don't Let Your Son Go Down On Me"........................... .




Colin

[Storiesmaniac]

you know, this is one ofmy favourite songs in the whole world, and yet i've never heard elton do it, i thought the beattles wrote it...gosh...hahaha any ways great work anita

[Lubesh]

Yeah he did a cover in 1974 was playing it but much prefer the beatles!

[dearest]

I love the Beatles ^_^ Great stuff here!

[Lubesh]

Thanks fire!

[ejenk21]

Lucy approaches she tasks him quite harshly

I like this for unusual use of tasks and fitting the scansion.

[Lubesh]

thanks ejenk.

[Peppy]

I liked it. It was clever and wittingly sweet. Understood. Well, sweet to me anyhoo.

Smily faces better expresses what I want to say. There.

[Lubesh]

thanks peppy..and smiley face