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29-11-2007, 08:50 PM
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one of those days
My favourite plate broke today,
into one of those days, shards of shattered earthenware, that you pick up, deftly, avoiding razor edges and white dust -producing a cough, more often that not, yes, one of those days
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30-11-2007, 07:07 AM
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Re: one of those days
I am not certain if this comment is suitable, but it must be stated that the simplicity of imagery is impeccable.
The vocabulary also unimpeachable… Quote:
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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12-12-2007, 03:39 AM
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Re: one of those days
'...into one of those days'....superb!
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