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Old 29-11-2007, 08:50 PM
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one of those days

My favourite plate broke today,
into one of those days,
shards of shattered earthenware,
that you pick up, deftly,
avoiding razor edges and white dust
-producing a cough,
more often that not,
yes, one of those days
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I am not certain if this comment is suitable, but it must be stated that the simplicity of imagery is impeccable.

The vocabulary also unimpeachable…

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avoiding razor edges and white dust
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'...into one of those days'....superb!
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