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Re: [PICK] Time Travel's Possible
I especially liked the first four lines, and the sub titles made this poem very readable. Good work.
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Re: [PICK] Time Travel's Possible
Well done with that. Sums up time good enough for me. I thought the ending was the most powerful.....I'd rather hope for the future where I can't see anything. That's what makes life fun, right?
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Re: [PICK] Time Travel's Possible
"the PRESENT is the point where we WAIT..." isn't it impossible to wait for the present? you wait for the future. good otherwise.
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Re: [PICK] Time Travel's Possible
no, the present is the now- the right now. You can't wait for something that is happening this instant.
God bless, Simeon
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Re: [PICK] Time Travel's Possible
This is quite unique sime. I'm not too keen on the 'Future' section, but as a whole I think this is a neat poem.
I was very intrigued by the title of this poem, and I'm glad to say I wasn't disappointed |
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