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Old 29-03-2008, 01:07 PM
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Exterminate the Predicate

“There must be none of this squeamish sentimentalism”
-said the paper to the poet,

Burn that noun! Gas him down!
and then fleece through his underclothes,
for shiny things,
‘a gilded rhyme,
a poetic clause’

so that in a hail of bullets,
and a Heil of Sieg,
we’ll have a pristine poem,
says the propaganda machine,
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Old 29-03-2008, 08:08 PM
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Re: Exterminate the Predicate

Simple with lots of meaning...brilliant.
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Old 29-03-2008, 08:13 PM
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Re: Exterminate the Predicate

Thanks Tyler! I liked this one, glad you got it and thanks for the comment mate.
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