[christcobb]

I didn’t mean to swallow you in the deep blue sea
(Tsunami Victims)
I didn’t mean to take those things that really belonged to me
(All things belong to God-People, Cars, Houses....etc)
The pounding of my fist on the ocean floor sent shocking waves through the inside of my pores
(Earthquake)
This disaster didn’t come out of pure anger , this disaster came out of mere frustration
(God is frustrated due to our disobedience)
Didn’t I give you the signs of the end so why do you act surprised when all these signs start to begin
embrace your fellow sister & brother closely because your time will soon come shortly
Didn’t I give you this land flowing with milk and honey but all you did was turn it into a place of greed and money.
The people I took are all up in glory waiting on the last disciple to tell his story
One day soon the sky will darken and out will come me and my disciples walking

[The Druid]

nice idea but the way you have written isn't exactly like what i would call poetry. it looks more like an essay this way. and one more thing. i haven't changed it but it should be "my disciples and me". you never say "me and somebody". its always, "somebody and me" ok?