[DarkPower]

Roman Holiday- A violent public spectacle or disturbance in which shame, degradation, or physical harm is intentionally inflicted on one person or group by another. The term Roman Holiday was often used when talking about the Holocaust.



Peace will be yours at last
If into my dark hollow I can cast
Your water will come soon
Though smoke covers the silver moon
Your loved ones you will see
Like them in the sky you will be
You are powerless, it is up to me
I will decide how to make you flee
Hungry, quiet, lives of the past forgoten
You are but a number now
A mark that makes you immune
Your heart is cold
You will forget soon
Survive you must
Or be left to die at noon
I have control now
And you will be taught
Don't cry to your god
Would he have left you to rot?
No friend,
He is letting you taste what he could give you not
He did not have the heart
To exterminate you
But no worries there
I will carry this through

[DarkPower]

I dont think this flowed correctly but I would love it if anyone could help out here.

[colinbaker62]

I personally think it flowed very well, and bravo for tackling such an emotive yet disturbing subject matter and doing so in a relatively sensitive manner..

[Serac]

That was good. 'God couldn't kill you, but I will'. That was good.

[HUNNYBUNNY]

another WOW! it was very good and when i read it in my head lol it flowed. great job again. it made me think of anyone with great power controle......great work again *HUGS*

[DarkPower]

Thanks all of you. One of my earlier poems. I guess lol.

[RENA HANDS]

Memorable and insightful. There was some stutter of flow. You must also watch your spelling and punctuation there should be period(s) in this poem.