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29-04-2006, 12:05 AM
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[PICK] Do Something
Republicans and Democrats ensnarled in childish playground spats.
They bicker in their box of sand while problems rage throughout our land. 
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03-05-2006, 08:10 AM
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heh. i think it happens everywhere. the singapore elections is becoming quite a farce right now.
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09-05-2006, 05:10 AM
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I love the descripitive words that you used...and the way you used them to get your point across.. keep it up!!
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16-05-2006, 03:33 AM
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Lots of description in two lines is really hard to do, and it seems like you did it. I especially like the image of the box of sand, like they are little kids.
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