[Corneac]

I am a product of the public of the school system,
Godlessness,
purveyed only by the RE teacher,
who would drop in
once a week,
and preach,

we sat around
in our uniformed hand-me-downs,
listened to the fire pits,
fidgeting,
with our hands down our pants

[Lubesh]

very wicked but quite normal...lol I had to check the category and was expecting satire, but re reading its so true...the efect they thought and thinkthey have to what great end result?

a brief but actually thought provoking read.

[Bluejay]

This was great. I love the contrast and the... shall we say "realism"? Not to mention the humor behind it. Got a laugh from me. Well done!

[Vorcla]

You knew that sixth finger would come in handy for something someday! Nice....dare I say it?...job.

[Bluejay]

Originally Posted by Vorcla

You knew that sixth finger would come in handy for something someday! Nice....dare I say it?...job.

Yes, let's give him a hand... <groan>

[Corneac]

hahahaha...thanks! I edd a new angle, and I think I found it. Thank for the...ahhh...."wit" and comments guys!

[Venomous Vixen]

This one is disturbing in a good way.. you really have been walking that line lately into the world of unspoken subject matter and taboo topics. I love it, it is unique and gutsy. This one gave an image, though I would not call it a pleasant image, more an image of an oversexed and uneducated society, confused children discovering themselves far too soon (well my take at least). Very well done.