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Old 08-09-2006, 08:23 AM
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Ring the Bells

Author's Note: One day, I was thinking about how blessed I am in my life right now to be so close to God, so this one's for him:

Ring the bells,
He is near,
Bow down on your knees,
The glorious king is here,
Shed Him your tears,
Of joy and grace,
He brings His light,
Into this sacred place,
Give Him your faith,
All the way through,
Pray for the miracles,
He will do unto you,
Praise Him with song,
Praise Him with dance,
Pray for Him to give you,
A second chance,
Pray for the world,
Of darkness and vain,
Of turmoil and destruction,
Of bloodshed pain,
Let Him come unto you,
And give you peace,
And let Him change the world,
So all war will cease,
Let Him say,
His wise words of choice,
Listen to Him closely,
And treasure His voice,
Give Him all your heart,
Your faith is whole,
Lift up your sins,
And lift up your soul,
Show Him you believe,
In all He has done,
Let Him know you see,
He is the Holy One,
Show Him you love Him,
In every way,
That you will remember Him,
Each and every day,
Tell Him to return,
And that you'll never forget,
All He's done for you,
Your faith you'll never regret,
Ring out those bells,
When the day ends,
And He steps back into the light,
Into heaven He ascends.
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Old 08-09-2006, 09:08 AM
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Cool Re: Ring the Bells

a miracle is something that benefits many people, not just you. But anyway, good job. This was a blessed poem.
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The glorious king is here,
Possibly…The glorious King is here I only mention this because you capitalized Him.

Impressive imagery and rhyme. I give 5/5!
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