[colinbaker62]

The figurative language is excellent I must say. So too, the contrasts with the material and the spiritual, the inner-self and the outer world which was very well described. A delight to read..

[Eadha Deora]

oh how lovely to get comments from someone else! thank you!!!

[squattaz]

And maybe,
in this simplicity
of loving the universe,

so this bit of the poem brings it together for me... in that love of the universe and life's circumstances not only expresses itself through laughter (happiness) but also through crying (sorrow). I would say its a well balanced, very inspirational piece. Thanks.