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12-07-2008, 02:30 PM
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Cowgirl
There is nothing in this world
so like the ass of a woman with the shape to spur a cowboy insane, accustomed and form-fitted to the contours of a saddle, yet answerable to none but rowel and rein
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Victor Frankenstein Last edited by Phonoho; 12-07-2008 at 03:02 PM. 
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13-07-2008, 01:06 AM
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Re: Cowgirl
succinctly put....unusual for you i thought, bbut usually i am wrong .
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13-07-2008, 01:08 AM
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Re: Cowgirl
Oh, ain't it the truth! Nicely done, Phonoho!
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13-07-2008, 03:45 AM
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Hehe, awesome, James!
I just don't quite know what else to say really except that I enjoyed it. Then again, I wouldn't expect much less from you.
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13-07-2008, 09:04 AM
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...yet answerable to none but rowel and rein
Fantastic! All I have is my highest rating of 5/5!
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13-07-2008, 09:56 AM
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Re: Cowgirl
Hmmm. Nice - taut and tight, just like the lady's ass.
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13-07-2008, 01:00 PM
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Re: Cowgirl
Ha, I appreciated this. Can't say much for the poetic form, I'm an idiot there but I really liked it. It's got a hint of the rawness of western life and the way it reflects the subject matter is great. Nice work.
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14-07-2008, 04:19 PM
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Re: Cowgirl
Hehe, the title drew me in.
 Wonderfully put, gave me a huge smile. Something different from you, but as enjpoyable as the rest of your work. Nicely done.
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