[Eadha Deora]

Where is the golden tree,
the tree, beneath the old man sits,
his legs are crossed,
his arms opened,
his beard entwined about the trunk,
as one drop, two drops, three
drops to his forehead,
sending shudders through every fiber.

The dream shifts again.

[Vorcla]

Ah, Jenn - your imagery always brings a smile to my face. This one is soothing, flowing, and very gentle. And dreamlike indeed. There are images here that hint at conflict - arms open, legs crossed. Will he welcome me or not? Perhaps he's trapped as well - beard entwined around the tree. Many possible interpretations. Very nice.

Rick

[Lubesh]

Hate to mention question marks...someone will. But the beginning i found awkward before the flowy of like rick said a dreamlike with mixed signals and room for thought. A bit different from your other but charming.

[Eadha Deora]

it is a bit jerky I agree ... thanks Lu ... will have to think on that