Loneliness as a word is acceptable and nothing blatantly so sinister until it dissolves into the membranes and fluids swamped already by emptiness; another of those wistful day words, always ready to moisten a tongue. They roll from it like an untamed lawn, sprawling and spread out before us and before we know it, unkempt inflection and overgrown syllables exaggerate the agony of walking barefoot through its maze of incongruities; a maze raised to the ground – out of sight, to guarantee prisoners. Only when spelled out and after a lesson learned does the drought end. Enriching its soil now full of tears shed, tears not wasted.
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loneliness as a word is acceptable and nothing blatantly so sinister until it dissolves into the membranes and fluids swamped already by emptiness; another of those wistful day words, always ready to moisten a tongue.
w o w.
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…, unkempt inflection and overgrown syllables exaggerate the agony of walking barefoot through its maze of incongruities; a maze raised to the ground-
e x c e p t i o n a l y c r e e p y. I shall never 'see' the English language as I have before.
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Last edited by RENA HANDS; 03-06-2009 at 11:59 AM.
This one kind of leaves me speechless. Hard to find words to do it justice. That was incredible - the language, the theme, everything. A clear picture of what loneliness is - and can be. Awesome, Lu...
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