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11-09-2005, 03:31 AM
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Thinking
I look at the world
My mind wanders and ponders Why don't people think Is it difficult To spend some time wondering About you and me Or how the world works And what role we play in it That grand scheme for us
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07-12-2005, 02:26 AM
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Re: Thinking
Very nice chain haiku, Jir
 It makes one....well...think. Some of the phrases seem unfinished, but I think that's usually a characteristic of haiku. (I'm no expert, of course). Good work, and keep writing poetry!
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11-12-2005, 01:48 AM
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Re: Thinking
how come I didnt see this before? good ... great I love it.
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11-12-2005, 05:31 PM
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thanks pple
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06-11-2007, 10:00 AM
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Re: Thinking
I always wonder why people never seem to think, as they were given a head upon their shoulders - it just seems logical that it would be used. Yet, society is not perfect, as we are reminded each and ever day sadly.
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10-04-2008, 10:52 AM
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Re: Thinking
Nice haiku work, and the subject is definately Haiku worthy. Very good job.
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