[Alex]

The dream that has lived on,
holds the key to, I believe,
understanding the universe,
and all I've seen.

We have to constantly think of it
in order to follow the clues it leaves.

The dream is a creature of which, this time,
is a map all in the same.

It leads us to what we need,
in order to fulfill ourselves,
and, dare I say,
the destiny we've been set to accomplish.

I watched carefully and aware,
as it floated into the air.
Its body began to glow and I saw my future in it.

I knew that this dream would lead me somewhere,
where was that somewhere,
would I recognize it at first glance?

[Alex]

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[kelpiewarrior]

I like you poem, it seems like you actually set out to write a poem, and came out with a wonderful poem, but this is just me speaking, and I really like this poem.

[Anonymous]

It was a bit anti-climatic. But I think it has a lot of potential.

[Corneac]

Nice. I joined it, I enjoed the ambiguity, and it's certainly that, with an equally ambiguous title. I think becuase it si so, it really leaves it open for interpreation and allows the reader to extract whatrver meaning they want from it. It also lets me be more perceptive to, say, the overall feelin fot he poem...it's evocative...and makes you think. I think precision could make it even better though. Great flow...and i'm looking forward to seeing more.

[Alex]

Thank you, I like this poem, I think that these are some of the best reveiws i've ever had.