[Venomous Vixen]

Sanity comes with a number
Take one and wait your turn

And in the room of impatience
Dance like no one’s watching
For it will all be over soon

In wild abandon
Embrace the insane

In the light of day
Shed normality’s shame

And in the room of impatience
With your number clutched
Enjoy the moments of free will
For soon, yours will be up

[Vorcla]

Whoa - you're on a roll tonight, Bri! Two poems in one night. You make it look so easy. Your images, as always, are stunning. Makes you stop and think. I like the somewhat sarcastic tone of this as well. Nicely done, Venomous One!

[Venomous Vixen]

Thanks hun

[RENA HANDS]

What wondrous imagery you pen to paper from that creative mind of yours. The emotions too so simple and easy to be understand by all. It really leaves you with a light hearted feeling or at least with this reader…

I will most definitely rate this as 5/5!

[Nupur]

I have been meaning to comment on this one since yesterday. Bookmarked it in case I forget. This is wonderful. Great theme and great take on it. 'Dance like no one's watching' adds do much flavour to this. I love the last stanza. The philosophical thoughts, the clear advice, it's all really good. This is something very different from you, and I love it.

[Lubesh]

In the light of day
Shed normality’s shame

Superb that bit. But on the whole quite a realsitic pics came to mind the odd bop and the thoughts that whir day to day.

[Venomous Vixen]

Thank you three!

[Corneac]

In wild abandon

There it is again. Kickass!

Now this is the Bri, i know and love. For someone who know a lot of crazy people, and is anything but sane, and everyday sees there loved ones questions the parameters of normality and sanity imbued by society. This was perfect...aren't we all a little insane? And it's just if either reach point where that's starkly evdient or if we choose to show people. I loved...gave me images of naked people dancing around in there apartments, evryone does it, but know one acknowledges it. Marvelous Bri.

And in the room of impatience
Dance like no one’s watching
For it will all be over soon

Double edged image for me. The whole...naked apartment thing lol...and the whole idea and reminded me of waiting room in a pysch ward...*shudders*

Loved it. Just so...damn...relatable...I felt it. Y'know?

[Corneac]

(BTW put this and "time heals all wounds" in advanced before I kick your ass.

[Venomous Vixen]

Not moving this one and it is time wounds all heals lol

This one has grown on me, quite a bit. Thank you, your comments mean the world.

[Rain]

Why the hell isn't this advanced? This was great, the images and just the whole thing was purely awesome. Every line and every word just as captivating as the next. Amazing job...

And in the room of impatience
Dance like no one’s watching
For it will all be over soon

Terrific...

[Venomous Vixen]

It is not in advanced because I am being stubborn and do not think it is good enough to be there. Thank you, Tay

[cheung shun sang]

Very good poem in needy life. Nice one i bet

[Venomous Vixen]

Thank you!