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Re: Wait Your Turn
Whoa - you're on a roll tonight, Bri! Two poems in one night. You make it look so easy. Your images, as always, are stunning. Makes you stop and think. I like the somewhat sarcastic tone of this as well. Nicely done, Venomous One!
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What wondrous imagery you pen to paper from that creative mind of yours. The emotions too so simple and easy to be understand by all. It really leaves you with a light hearted feeling or at least with this reader…
I will most definitely rate this as 5/5!
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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I have been meaning to comment on this one since yesterday. Bookmarked it in case I forget. This is wonderful. Great theme and great take on it. 'Dance like no one's watching' adds do much flavour to this. I love the last stanza. The philosophical thoughts, the clear advice, it's all really good. This is something very different from you, and I love it.
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Now this is the Bri, i know and love. For someone who know a lot of crazy people, and is anything but sane, and everyday sees there loved ones questions the parameters of normality and sanity imbued by society. This was perfect...aren't we all a little insane? And it's just if either reach point where that's starkly evdient or if we choose to show people. I loved...gave me images of naked people dancing around in there apartments, evryone does it, but know one acknowledges it. Marvelous Bri. Quote:
Loved it. Just so...damn...relatable...I felt it. Y'know?
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(BTW put this and "time heals all wounds" in advanced before I kick your ass.
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Not moving this one
and it is time wounds all heals lolThis one has grown on me, quite a bit. Thank you, your comments mean the world.
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Why the hell isn't this advanced? This was great, the images and just the whole thing was purely awesome. Every line and every word just as captivating as the next. Amazing job...
And in the room of impatience Dance like no one’s watching For it will all be over soon Terrific...
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Very good poem in needy life. Nice one i bet
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