[angelbaby]

When your life is nothing but misery
And all your hopes and dreams fade away
I'll stay by your side through thick and thin
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
If you start crying I'll cry with you
I'll even listen to sad songs with you too
If only you knew
How much of a friend I am to you
You'll always know that our friendship is true
Friends forever, we'll always be together
As long as I'm with you
Soon we'll be older
And days become shorter
We will be best friends till we reach the end
And when we die and in the future we become
someone else,
I hope we'll meet again

[angelbaby]

If your a true freind you'll enjoy this poem too
and feel the same way that i do
about my friends

[spinx]

very cool, i love it

[Palusscrib]

Good intentions but it is kind of rough around the edges. The rhyme sounds very forced and that hurts the poem. Why don't you try going freeverse with this one. In my twenty years of writing poetry I have found that sentimental poems are best served freeverse.

[angel]

this is nice angel. beautiful language and very good flow. nice one girl

[Jayna]

From your poem you can see that you are a true friend that will be there for your friends.So, as a friend and fellow lover of poetry, I would like to tell you that your poem was great.