[Corneac]

So today, the mosquito told me,
as he sucked my blood,
that he’s done,
being the little voice in head,
he’s crawling away, after he’s had his fill.
Yes, crawling, with whatever dignity
a parasite can have,

so he took his time,
and I didn’t even notice his absence,
my skin was numb,
but I felt his emptiness,
of what he took,
of what he sucked,
yeah, I can feel it,
the slight absence
as my heart pump,
and as you weave though my veins,
I can feel what’s gone,
what’s left me,
and I’d like to say
that I don’t give a shit,
but the mosquito knows,
he can feel me still within,.
That subtle as it was,
I miss his take, I miss his prick,

[Gurdit]

A mosquito?
Hmm... now I don't know what to make of this at all... were you angry/something like that when you wrote this?

[Venomous Vixen]

Another too personal to really dig into. Great use of mosquito. There are a few typos in there you may want to comb back over but again, I will leave my thoughts at that on this one. See what you are doing to me, haha short reviews are not my thing! Oh well