[EternalPen]

I don't get this...
I know I don't understand!
I just need more hurt...
Pass it underhand.

Give me more pills,
I can't concentrate!
I looked and thought,
Where did I find this hate?

I wish to be free,
And I wish that you knew,
But I understand.
You don't know who...

You see my face,
But not my soul!
I never knew
I had to be so bold...

I push you back,
It's the only way,
You can remember
Without the pay.

I've no change;
Nor a heart to spare.
Close your eyes...
While I break this pair!

Feel my heart,
Feel my pain...
Plenty to lose,
Nothing to gain...

No more love,
No more shame!
Ignore my words,
Ignore my game.

It hurts my soul;
It hurts my head...
But, please, for me!
...Imagine I'm dead...

[Nupur]

Ah, good one here. Love the last few stanzas.

you see my face,

I think you missed you the capitalization on this one. from what I see you put the first alphabet in each line in uppercase.

Punctuation is purely subjective, but here I felt there were too many exclamatory marks and ellipsis. Reduce a few of them if you want. Apart from that, I think it's well done.

[EternalPen]

Well I didn't know what went where, and whether or not to place a comma after everyone so...