[Corneac]

I fell in love, out of love,
and one day, forgot to notice the sky,
it could have been blue,
that breathless sort of blue- that reminds me of you,
of torrents of love poems
and stark as the autumn sky,
as brilliant as sunshine,
that shines, no wonder or why,
like footprints of grey,
that dampen the moon,
the sky lost it’s grace,
as soon a I noticed,
that I had lost you

[Nupur]

the sky lost it’s grace,

Possessive. So no apostrophe.

This is something different from you. The rhymes are great and the cumulative effect of everything is simply awesome.

like footprints of grey,
that dampen the moon,

These lines made me go whoa! Terrific.

['Ginnis]

Not your usual broken line personification. I like that, it's refreshing. The imagery was endearing though not complex. There's a lot to be said for simplicity. I particularly loves the line "the sky lost its grace." Good stuff, dear.