[Corneac]

I’ve climbed the next flight of stairs,
without moving my legs,
and now I look down,
at the spiral of limbs,
of heart-broken hymns,
the prayer,
so unfair,
to those of whom I love,
left, lying, so I could move on,
and I tell myself to wait,
they can’t be far behind,
but of course,
innately me,
I broach the step
and flee,

[Lubesh]

Really loved this...seems a different ramble and more confident and unique/surreal ideas and expression. Nicecorn!

[Venomous Vixen]

I agree with Lu, different tone here, incredible. That opening image just smacks you, looking back on tangled feet still stuck on stairs. and then the end, the fleeing, it is surprising, and then not... very human like to see what is, try and do what is right and then run. Anyhow, I loved this one and remind me in case I forget to get it in March's PotM

[Nupur]

I agree with Bri and Lu. Amazing work! The rhymes were nicely done and the flow was flawless.

[Corneac]

Thankyee friends...and you all. I love you guys..and tyou help me to no end. Thankyou. I like it too...sorta...hmmm

[Jayna]

Great poem. i loved it. Keep up the good work