[Anonymous]

I am the king of my life
an orphaned prince,
now alone
to rule my own existence.

You were the queen.
The monarch of my living.
Your abandonment,
is now declared unlawful.

Is this not enough reason
to convict you of treason?

I shall.
I am king.

I won't be your knight,
a loyal hand
to your tyranny.
This kingdom is not yours.

You made your move
and so did I,
my independence.
I won't be your pawn.

This makes her a traitor
so why can’t I hate her.

I shall.
I am king.

[Nupur]

Pretty good, Anonymous. You brought out the feeling of anger very well. Just a couple of edits:

I wont be your knight,

You missed the apostrophe here. It should be won't.

your authoritarianism;

This line seems to be a bit out of place. The thought is sort of disconnected. I think you meant that queen is an authoritarian, but that didn't come across.

Perhaps say something along the lines of "I won't budge under your authoritarianism". Don't put this very line, since it's not at all poetic, but you could try something like that.

I wont be your pawn.

Apostrophe. It should read won't.

Good work on this one!

[Anonymous]

Thanks for reading. I changed what you suggested, and I agree about that line with authoritarianism. It did seem out of place, but I found a line that I hope fits better within the poem. Thanks again.