[Cute_girl_prisc]

Day And Night, Flower and Bee

I am the day you are the night.
I will hold you tight,
Til' the day I die.
I will cry,
If you ever stop loving me.
I'm a flower and your a bee.
And I can see,
We are meant to be,
And you love me.
I Love you too.

Priscilla A Burt

[Cute_girl_prisc]

i fixed it agin and the last line was not meant to rhyme, as i did wright it for one of my ex quit awile ago

[Keplaz]

Sweet. Your ex should have been honoured to have such a sweet piece written for them. I didn't get the day and night part but I loved the bee and flower bit. It's a short and sweet read.

[PaulJJ]

I'm a flower and your a bee.
And I can see,
We are meant to be,

really liked this. Im confused about the night and day.Besides that, really enjoyed it.

[Ferris]

I'm a flower and your a bee. Should that be, 'You are,' or maybe 'You're'

Very cute though!

Ferris