[kelpiewarrior]

When?

When did it all begin?
Was it when we first met?
Was it later,
After I got to know you?
When did your voice make me happy
While my own heart was silently breaking?
Why is it that I want you around me
Through the thick and thin?
I want to know,
No,
I need to know
Exactly when I fell in love with you.

[Nupur]

Good poem! Nice tone, pretty angry tone in fact. It's definitely a nice effort. Now keep writing!

[Rain]

I liked this one kelpie, I liked how the question were asked and then demanded to be answered. I've always liked poems that asked questions to the recieving party of the poem, and I don't know why. But nevertheless good job, and keep up the good writing

[PaulJJ]

Im not sure about this poem...i dont know if i liked it or not :s...but i do know it was well written. good work

[Venomous Vixen]

I enjoyed the simplicity of this. Its focus on one thing nagging at the mind, when's and why's of love. I have found myself in that place before and even though nothing ever seems to answer you, you continue asking and asking again. Very perfectly put here, and in this case I enjoyed the list of questions.

[Peppy]

Awe. That was cute. It was so simple. It's amazing how a question can come out to be poetry. I am so rating this and going to give you a rep point.

I actually like how this is formed. I usually don't like how some poetry look likes, but this just seems perfect for the piece.

This kind of confused me. But as I started to figure it out, this is the key point in the poem. A type of poem that says "you can look but you can't touch" or "just out of reach".

When did your voice make me happy
While my own heart was silently breaking?