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Love Again
I'll always have you with me
A peace of you I will keep No matter what happens to us No matter what happens to me There will always be a part of you That will forever stay with me I can't imagine you leaving I can't think of the depth of the dark That Felling of loss When you look outside the window alone I will never forget my broken heart And how you fixed it How you cared for it How you showed me love And I loved again And I pray this time It will last till the end Last edited by HUNNYBUNNY; 06-11-2005 at 12:57 PM. Reason: i missed a word |
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Re: Love Again
I like this cause it seems sad and romantic at the same time..I guess that's possible, right? But ya I thought it was a nice poem
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Re: Love Again
I liked this. Has a soothing kind of feeling to it. it was a nice read. good work
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Re: Love Again
Seemed like it was so easily spoken like you could just say it to the person straight up, word for word. Filled with hope and emotions of love it really did touch me... hit a soft spot you could say... very relatable... great job.
Oh... "A peace of you I will keep" piece?
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