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Old 06-11-2005, 12:55 PM
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Love Again

I'll always have you with me
A peace of you I will keep
No matter what happens to us
No matter what happens to me
There will always be a part of you
That will forever stay with me
I can't imagine you leaving
I can't think of the depth of the dark
That Felling of loss
When you look outside the window alone
I will never forget my broken heart
And how you fixed it
How you cared for it
How you showed me love
And I loved again
And I pray this time
It will last till the end

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Old 09-11-2005, 02:24 AM
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Re: Love Again

I have set out below a couple of errors , because for some reason my edits are not being saved, so u will have to fix them, otherwise nice poem.

A Peace of you..should be 'piece'
'Felling of loss? remove the capital and should be 'feeling'
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Old 29-11-2005, 06:43 AM
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Re: Love Again

I like this cause it seems sad and romantic at the same time..I guess that's possible, right? But ya I thought it was a nice poem
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Re: Love Again

Ah a poem of hope! well done
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Re: Love Again

I liked this. Has a soothing kind of feeling to it. it was a nice read. good work
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Re: Love Again

Seemed like it was so easily spoken like you could just say it to the person straight up, word for word. Filled with hope and emotions of love it really did touch me... hit a soft spot you could say... very relatable... great job.

Oh... "A peace of you I will keep" piece?
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