[HUNNYBUNNY]

I miss you love
My angel from above
So far away
Yet still in touch
Giving me gifts
Love, joy and guidance
To brighten my days
As you try to bring
A smile upon my face
My life is changing
As you know
I just had to say
Thank you to the one
My only love

[nightcharmer]

Wow, this is a short poem but it has a great impact! A very angelic poem I must say. Good job HUNNY!

[BookWhale***]

I agree with charmer - short, and angelic. but almost too short. try to extend your writing!

[LullabyHearts]

I enjoyed the first two lines

Love, joy and guidance

Comma please!

[Cute_girl_prisc]

awww that is so cute it sound like you are so in love great peas of work

[Sonnenaufgang]

Hello,
So I think your poem very well. It is short and brings clear on the point what you want to say. I think it is really very appealing ...
Unfortunately, my poems are not upload, because I only write German poems.

[cyrusia]

Hope you wont mind if I share some of the poems written here with my girlfriend. I have been lucky to get someone in my life who understands true feelings and is not like some others who feel love means the person will gift you with expensive things frequently. Its the expression and feelings that are priority to both me and her and I know she is going to love these poems. Well later on I will acknowledge the name of the place from where I got them as she is never going to believe if I said I wrote these.