[DarkPower]

Just another moon lit story
Written on my page last night
Told the truth about forgiveness
Between wrong and the right

What had I done in this life
To make this become the end
My mind drew another blank
But it burst from my pen

(Chorus)
Light became my shadow
What did all this really mean
You stood there right before me
But I couldn't come clean

So many things were left unsaid

Just then you looked right at me
with your big and knowing eyes
You told me that you knew
and to drop the sad disguise

I didn't want to listen
Though it all seemed so clear
Had you come to realize
What it is I really fear

But then,

(Chorus)
Light became my shadow
What did all this really mean
You stood there right before me
But I couldn't come clean

And I listened so hard
But I didn't quite hear

So many things were left unsaid...

Just another moonlit story
written on my page last night

[Ryankia]

Wow Dp - This really hit the nails head for me. The portrayal, the words, everything.

Perfect

[DarkPower]

haha thanks a lot. Jiron inspired me... yes its true, his song.

[Cute_girl_prisc]

this would make a really cool song i love it

[RENA HANDS]

I too in agreement with Prisc and Ryankia; this ballad is extremely elegant not only in imagery, also in emotional dramatics. The write here reminds of a note sung so beautifully by Celine Dion. And I love her!

[DarkPower]

haha well I am no song writer so that means a lot from both of you.

[king4adaze5]

I've always enjoyed reading your writings DP, and this is another added to the list of great reads from you.

My favorite part...

My mind drew another blank
But it burst from my pen

I've always felt my emotions are expressed better through my my pen, so I loved this line instantly.

[Rain]

I enjoyed this... it really felt like this could be a song from a major music artist... like a song on an album that the fans love but it's not mainstream. And sometimes those are the best types of songs... for me at least. And this seemed so personal, and touching. Like those songs usually are. Showing of the true artists inner personal feelings. Great job.