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25-07-2008, 06:33 AM
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Fireproof
I...am fireproof...
Come on burn me...I tell the truth... Do you think it's a lie... What I keep inside... Look through your eyes... Fly free toward the skies... (chorus) I tell you this. Feel the ties on your wrist. There is no answer for you. Let this sink through. I am fireproof. Why can't you see? That I am fireproof. Can you see me? Cause I am fireproof. This is who I am. And I am fireproof. The trigger I will jam. Here...let me shut the door. You need not see this. There...see it sprawled out on the floor... Could you ask for more... (chorus) I tell you this. Feel the ties on your wrist. There is no answer for you. Let this sink through. I am fireproof. Why can't you see? That I am fireproof. Can you see me? Cause I am fireproof. This is who I am. And I am fireproof. The trigger I will jam. And in this plight, we will begin to fight. In our sight, our will will be our might. And in our plight, when our will is our might. Well our sights...,will show us how to fight. We will fight. I am fireproof... I am fireproof... This I am fireproof... And now I'm fire... (chorus) Oh I am fireproof. Why can't you see? That I am fireproof. Can you see me? Cause I am fireproof. This is who I am. And I am fireproof. The trigger I did jam...
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Concentrating on something is simply a small factor that deals with focusing. To truly focus on something, you must understand how that something works from the inside view of it. Last edited by Alex; 27-07-2008 at 09:06 AM. 
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29-07-2008, 03:20 AM
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Re: Fireproof
I enjoyed this. I had it as a bitey almost punk thing (oldpunk) also there was a song 'Firestarter' a while back, thi put me in mind of it with the pace and topic, despite the stop for deeper more serious words/thoguhts. goodstuff alex.
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05-08-2008, 12:29 PM
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Re: Fireproof
Thank You, I really enjoyed writing this song.
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05-08-2008, 03:30 PM
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Re: Fireproof
Pretty flashy writing you have there, mind you, I don't mean flashy in a bad way. I could so hear this being sung. I'd probably listen to it. The rhythem of the song is catchy, actaully makes me want to sing along especially the chorus.
Not to insult you, if you don't like the band, but this song kind of reminds me of a Linkin Park song. I'm just earing it in my head and mouth. (The old Linkin Park songs, this song reminds me of.)
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07-08-2008, 11:36 AM
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Re: Fireproof
This would make for an entertaining song, I think.
This here not a biggy, but it caught my eyes… Well our sighs…,will show us how to fight. (Which punctuation are u using?)
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