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Old 16-08-2008, 01:20 PM
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Bring It Back

Steal me from my pain,
please just love me once again.
Take me back to a time,
a time when I could call you mine.
When I could hold your hand
and you would smile.
Just hide me from my own denial.

Just bring it back!
The happiness we felt,
when we smiled and laughed and loved and cried!
It was your love that you could not deny!

Just take me back!
So I can stop lying, I can stop crying,
I can stop denying the very truth!

Just give it back!

Hold you in my arms,
squeeze to make sure it’s reality,
you shake my very anatomy.



Just bring it back!
The happiness we felt,
when we smiled and laughed and loved and cried!
It was your love that you could not deny!

Just take me back!
So I can stop lying, I can stop crying,
I can stop denying the very truth!

Please just give it back!

Until the day I can say “she’s mine”
I’ll cry and wish and want and pray,
until that glorious, fateful, happy day!
I’ll scream to the very top of my lungs,
I’ll sing every song that you love,
I’ll wish and need and want and pray,
until my pain is stolen away!

Just bring it back!
The happiness we felt,
when we smiled and laughed and loved and cried!
It was your love that you could not deny!

Just take me back!
So I can stop lying, I can stop crying,
I can stop denying the very truth!

Please just give it back!
Please just give it back...
Please I want it back...
Please just give it back.
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Old 16-08-2008, 01:21 PM
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Re: Bring It Back

My first set of lyrics so try and not mock me.
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Old 01-11-2008, 10:23 AM
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Re: Bring It Back

Very sad song, wanting another and just wishing they would come back. You did well writing for your first song, I would like to listen if you ever put it to music. You may need to expand the verses and maybe shorten the chorus would be the only things, but very good to read as is right now

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