[Rain]

*bold type is the woman singing. Italic for the man singing. Both for singing together.*

Getting high off your fumes of this damnation.
Making me cry from your heartbreak.
I feel the burn of my humiliation,
how much can my swollen heart take?

Feeling sad from the situation.
I take it back will you please come back to me.
feel the slipping of concentration,
can’t we just go back to what we used to be?

Two different sides in a battle of breaking hearts.
How much more ‘till our pain finally departs?
I wish we could be what we used to,
give me something so I may get through.

Thinking about you, please let this day pass.
I wonder how many more smiles I can fake.
Why is it I constantly come in last?
Just how much more can my stinging heart take?

Two different sides in a battle of bleeding hearts.
How much more ‘till our pain finally departs?
I hope he’s thinking of me.
I hope she’s missing me.
Why did I do it?
I’m tired of bullshit.
This is getting to be too much.
The pressure over bearing.
The laughter over taken.
The smiles taken away.
What else can I say?
I’m so unhappy.

Two different sides in a battle of broken hearts.
Why won’t this pain finally depart?
Suffer ‘till the end of our days,
please oh please take the pain away.

[Rain]

Wrote these just a few minutes ago, and because I don't use the submission bin anymore, I didn't know if these should be advanced or amatuer so I put them in amatuer so I wouldn't step on anybody's toes.

Thanks,
Tay(the most loveable bastard ever)

[Rain]

Made puncuation edits...

[Peppy]

Well, well, that's a pretty good song. I can hear this as a post-hardcore song. I dunno why? It's in the ears I suppose.

There's some good heartbreaking stuff in here. I enjoyed there were no lyrics that didn’t make sense to me (unlike the 90‘s music). Bare-ridden and excellent.

Dunno what else to say. I enjoyed it, Rain.

[Rain]

Thanks buddy I appreciate it.