[Rain]

May I just say, that my life feels as if it’s over.
I’m so very rarely sober,
Yet you turn the other shoulder.
You look past me, as if it doesn’t matter.
I say “Hey I guess I had her.”
Feeling bruised, bloody, battered.

And I do believe I’m lost,
What does happiness cost?
Why am I still stuck crying,
Weeping and constantly sighing?
“Why do I bother trying?”

I must say that you get to me,
A good man is what I want to be,
Leave me alone, I hate this, don’t you see?

And I do believe I’m lost,
What does happiness cost?
Why am I still stuck crying,
Weeping and constantly sighing?
“Why should I bother trying?”
(X2)

My acoustic strings will ring until I’m finished singing!
My eyes focused on you til the voice in my head stops ringing!
Until my hand can stop the selfishly clinging!

So can I find my way home?
Can I lay down and rest?
Can I no longer sleep alone?
Can I once again sit with the best?

‘Cause I do believe I’m lost,
What does happiness cost?
Why am I still stuck crying,
Weeping and constantly sighing?
“Why am I stuck trying?”

[Vorcla]

Sheer torment comes through. You captured it well. I'd like to hear what this sounds like. I put up MP3's with a couple of my songs; I need to do more, but...time. I think it would be cool if you could do that. Nice job.

[Rain]

It would be cool but first off I still struggle in guitar and I suck at singing . Thank you for reading Rick, sorry I didn't get back to you sooner I was then forgot and just now noticed lol. I appreciate it.

[Lubesh]

Impressive....words and if u had a tune....Your rhymes especially for lyrics to transfer were quite something with the sounding and rhyme, could imagine a a very credible song here.

[Rain]

Thank you Lubesh