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02-12-2005, 06:37 AM
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Flutter
The butterfly flies with its wings open
And has her colors showing Her wings moving And the wind carries Her light marvelous body As fast as she can, she flies To different places At different times Playing tag with the little children Seeing them smile As they chase her Till she flies to far And they just watch her And her beautiful wings Flutter, flutter, flutter
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The best poetry is born not written! -------<@ *HUGS* Last edited by Dark Kitten; 02-12-2005 at 11:36 AM. 
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14-12-2005, 06:19 PM
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Re: Flutter
It is a joy reading this poem. Lovely indeed. There are a few spelling errors though.
And the wind carries Her light marvellous body Till she flies too far Other than that, nice butterfly! 
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15-12-2005, 04:27 AM
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oopy lol im a horrable speller even with spell check........ anyway thank you for the comment i thought it was a cute little poem...........*HUGS* o by the way i think your stuff is really good!
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15-12-2005, 01:16 PM
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It's a really cute poem indeed. Haha. Thank you too.
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15-12-2005, 01:19 PM
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it's very happy, and cute...
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15-12-2005, 07:10 PM
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Very cute, nice write.
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17-12-2005, 04:50 PM
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I really liked the feeling you created with this. Really lighthearted.
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20-01-2006, 08:22 AM
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I liked it Hunny Bunny. I will rate it well.
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21-01-2006, 09:01 AM
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Yes I am fond of this one too Hunny Bunny, a very pleasing write.
Oh, and I wudn't worry abut spolling, I nover use mi spull chucker either !
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21-01-2006, 03:28 PM
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As no doubt girly as this is going to make me sound, and my case thus far here hasn't been very strong in my favor, the poem reminded me of how I used to watch butterflies while at the park and such. There, I said it. It was a nice poem that brought around nice memories. (Don't judge me you guys.)
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02-04-2006, 01:32 AM
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I really like this poem a lot it is very light and happy.
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