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Old 08-08-2004, 12:43 AM
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Rain & Pain
Sometimes I feel
Like a well
The only difference is
The well
Takes in the rain
And I take in the pain
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Old 17-08-2004, 05:30 PM
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Re: Rain & Pain
...short. IF u add like a couple finishing powerful lines. Itd kick butt
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Old 17-08-2004, 11:10 PM
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sometimes i believe meaningful and powerful messages comes in few words. to a certain extent, i think the poems says all.
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Re: Rain & Pain
Excellent poem. It is amazing how much emotion can be conveyed in a few short lines.
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