[Jayna]

What is your Attitude?
Is it what people say or do or think?
What is more important than facts,
More important than money, power, and respect?
Than circumstance, failure, or success?
It will make or break you, your family and friends.
It doesn't control you or does it?

We can not change our past, but our future is what you make it.
Life is what happens to you and how you react to it.
We can change, we can choose, and we can react with ATTITUDE.

[squattaz]

I may be wrong but you were trying to bring together different 'cliche' ideas we have in society?

[Jayna]

I was just trying to reflect my veiw on how our attitude influnce our different behaviors in society.

[Ryankia]

Hey Jayna! Fascinating piece you have here! Glad squattaz brought it up, otherwise it would've been awhile until I could get around to reading it!

Couple things:

What people say or do or think
What is more important than facts

The first line you almost stop short in the thought pattern then you change directions in the next line with no real working transition of some sort.

Also, there are some places which could use a little extra punctuation to bring out more meaning an punch to the piece (mostly Question Marks and Commas)

Overall, it isn't a bad poem, yet it could use a bit of work to help it flow a bit better with what is given

[Jayna]

thank you for you suggestion i will work on it.