[DarkPower]

A friend just finding himself

Sometimes I walk around not sure if in a dream,
Reality is so blurred nothing is what it seems,
But every now and then it appears to make sense
The fog begins to raise, the forest not so dense
That is when I notice the beauty that I missed
The grandeur of the moutains buried in the morning mist
If only I could take the time each and every day
To stop and smell the roses and rediscover my way
I have taken the long road but many lessons I have learned
I've stood outside the fire, close enough to get burned
I have made life more difficult than it actually had to be
Because of my short sightedness and unwillingness to be
So now I walk alone with no one by my side
Only my selfishness fueled by my foolish pride
So I make myself this promise, I will open up my heart
And get to know the man inside before again I start

[Lubesh]

This is among my favourites up to now of your work, well constructed and well worded.

[DarkPower]

Thank you this is one of my favs. too

[psycosis]

That is one of my favs as well......I am glad that you posted it because it rings so true with me

[DarkPower]

lol oh dont i already know that psycosis lol

[squattaz]

does this piece suggest or hint at recursion? a cycle of self/ rediscovery?