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07-04-2005, 05:16 AM
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Poetic
I sit and read of what we write
and some things dont make sense I have to often wonder could we really be this dense I look at many topics and ponder what is in your mind Some views are farfetched making me think you may be blind But thats the beauty of it all there is no rhyme or reason A topic from the heart can never be out of season So say what you will rant at you own discretion Just judge me not I say for these are my own transgressions Last edited by Lubesh; 07-04-2005 at 05:42 AM. Reason: alteration/delete type 
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07-04-2005, 05:46 AM
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Re: Poetic
Very nice poem. made me think of myself.
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07-04-2005, 05:49 AM
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Thank you.....I worte it because I notice all of the different topics people use and then kinda wonder whats in their mind then but then again its not my place to judge
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07-04-2005, 05:54 AM
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No it isnt but people often say that and still judge. subconciously
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11-04-2005, 07:35 AM
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Those are the worst bigots in the world....the ones that judge subconsciously and then put up a facade.....Those are the ppl I detest and if there really is a god they will be judged accordingly.....If you have a problem just come out with it.....I hate ppl that come to you with a fake smile
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14-04-2005, 11:02 AM
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yeah, exactly, why do people have to judge like that? And then not tell you . . . stab you behind your back.
I think that gossips and liars are worse than thieves and violence . . . (as long as the violence isn't against women or children . . . THEN the violence is WAY worse . . . grrrrr). Good poem too.
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14-04-2005, 11:05 AM
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30-07-2005, 08:47 AM
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It would be kind of boring if we were all the same.
Then we could fight about not being different, and wish that we were so we could disagree. This poem makes you think. Last edited by Intrinsic; 30-07-2005 at 08:50 AM.
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