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18-10-2005, 07:18 AM
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Unknown
Eagle spread wide open
Fine.... Touching beyond reality Scared.... Chanting gibbering nonsense Confused.... Aching pain of loud love Shine.... Dreaming forth unknown worlds Power.... Powder on disguising lies Keep.... Shooting down mocking faces Lie.... Killing my inner conscience Fear.... Lying below the foolishness Break.... Losing all humanity Lost.... Freeing foreign feelings Hurt.... Defying expectations Hear.... Easing my mental hunger Care.... Angry with people's shame Find. Powerless spirits fleeing Pain! Running away from here Gone!!
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18-10-2005, 07:20 AM
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Re: Unknown
This is a strange poem I wrote. Strange....But I really like the first line.
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19-10-2005, 10:16 PM
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Re: Unknown
Absolute beauty. Strange yes but very well written.
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20-10-2005, 03:37 AM
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Re: Unknown
Thats a very good effort and style i enjoyed it v much
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20-10-2005, 11:09 PM
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Re: Unknown
I love your style, you never cease to amaze me.
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27-10-2005, 03:18 AM
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Re: Unknown
Thankx for all the comments. Look out for my next poem "Internal War"
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27-10-2005, 08:59 AM
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Re: Unknown
it was a beautifully written poem. i enjoyed it alot.
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27-10-2005, 09:10 AM
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I like it...its diffrent...carries its own personality and defies the rules..good job
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27-10-2005, 09:13 AM
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hmm I read the comments before I read the actual poem. I cant say I agree with anything people said. I personaly didnt like it one bit but I am in a bad mood so dont go with what I say. I will have to read more of what you have writen to actualy say if I like your work. At least you wrote though, I have been slacking.
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27-10-2005, 10:36 PM
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meh your always in a bad mood. Lol.
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29-10-2005, 03:17 AM
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Hehehe...it wasn't hard to write this. It sorta just flowed out when I began writing.
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29-10-2005, 02:48 PM
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Re: Unknown
Then lucky you.....keep writing good stuff!
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01-11-2005, 11:36 AM
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Re: Unknown
Yes... interesting stye to put the poem in. Loved it, though.
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