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30-05-2006, 10:48 PM
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To Be Like Me
This slapped me in the face while I was trying to write one about a hot summer day spent under a maple tree, not sure if I like it but I like the message so I figured I'd share.
What's it like To be like me What's it like To be so free My concern, my care For social affair Was stolen, was taken Was given for free What's it like To be like me It's freedom, it's flying It's smiling with glee Join me, lets dance Join the romance Or stand in the corner For fear of their glance
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31-05-2006, 01:01 AM
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Re: To Be Like Me
Good stuff superbum ...the second verse for me didn't have the same buzz to it with the words used towards the end of it and rhythm but i loved it
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