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*Special* The 100 Word Challenge Like the Fifty-Five, the 100 Word Challenge runs on the same schedule. The purpose of this Challenge is to teach and encourage writers on brevity and word economy.

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Old 19-12-2009, 10:35 AM
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Wink XMAS 2009 100W/C -Untitled

This holy season
Bombs, bullets are exploding
Such wonder is this.
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Dying, crying eyes
Soldiers, rolling tanks, draw near
Infidels seek sympathy.
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Frightened little boy,
Clasp, dispensed Holy Bible
Where is his Father?
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White Tiger Lilies
Desiccated black petals
Where is his Father?
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Scarlet soldiers march
Hear Torricelli’s Trumpet
Infidels are falling.
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Bellowing fire spews
A siren of gossamer, sings
Clasping her bouquet.
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Alluring blank orbs
Raven curls sweep pale shoulders
Temptress in guise?
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White Tiger Lilies
Desiccated black petals
The Bible, crashes.
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White Tiger Lilies
Desiccated black petals
Tainted tribute, falls.


© Rena Hands December 2009 –This entry was most inspired by Silver Bells, songwriters: Jay Livingston and Raymond B. Evans, I believe.
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Old 19-12-2009, 10:38 AM
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Wink Re: XMAS 2009 100W/C -Untitled

Editors and or Administrators, I made an error and meant for my entry to be Centered, could You correct this 'format/paragraph(s) error?'
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Old 19-12-2009, 12:34 PM
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Thank You so very, very, very, very much.
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Interesting what going by just inspiration will lead to. A very interesting piece that I'm still digesting. (Sorry... bit late and am tired- but it lacked comments so I thought I'd drop a line )
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No worries at all my Lady, Syrah. I’m just relieved and most happy that this entry actually qualifies as something not necessarily ‘going against the grain.’ I think I screwed myself with my TotM #14 -Father Christmas submission. I thought ‘Father Christmas’ was a fair game idea. It wasn’t until later that the realization, the connection had to be with Santa Clause (I smack my forehead-against the wall). Oh, well, ‘what’s done is done’ is something too that ‘they’ say (lol)…

Thank You very, very, very much for the read and compliment(s). And I hope to see/read ur entry too for the XMas Special?
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Re: XMAS 2009 100W/C -Untitled

As I have said..well done and a different tack and not so gentle haiku.

You have more than a 5 count in this line

'A bellowing fire spews' You have 6 syllables
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Lubesh,

www.rhymezone. come states that ‘spew(s)’ is just one syllable. If I’m still in error, I’ll correct this.

A1 bellowing2 fire1 (4) spews1? 5?

OR is it –

A bellowing fire spew 5?

Crap! Damn this poetry, Damn.
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a (1) bel-low-ing (3) fire (1) spews (1)
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MOTHER ******

and U know the rest.

Lady Syrah, TY for the English/Spelling/Syllable* lesson.

I shall make the correction -Immediately.
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